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strawberries or still by ~kirastorm:iconkirastorm:



your kiss is hot and wet
and  you laugh and laugh
i drown in your taste
and try to explain
you are so sweet
innocent and ripe
bursting with flavor
nothing like cherries
your are summer sun
and long hot nights
strawberries red and sweet
placed in mouth
hand over fist
rather into basket
joy and love
tangled together
in sweetness
you kiss me again
and i push you away
still tangled in words
and the weight of your taste
your heart breaks
mine is already broken
and that is what i wanted to say
you are far to good for me
all summer sun
all innocence
you are strawberries on my tongue
and long after you are gone
i am still drowning
©2008-2010 ~kirastorm
:iconkirastorm:

Author's Comments

looking into my fridge.

like a shot to the spine

i was frozen

still drowning

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:iconsimplisticwords:
love this one!

I know it's about food, but it reminds me of D.

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:jsenn: In the blood is where the words are held. We who are true poets, whether with word, paint, or photo, are held in the blood. :blackrose:
:iconkirastorm:
kisses! kisses and food! and the way different food tastes to me.

cherrys are bitter, and strawberries are well, evverything i just wrote.

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fading in the future
the past awaits
:iconsimplisticwords:
With you on that one - I hate cherries.

Awesome job!

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:jsenn: In the blood is where the words are held. We who are true poets, whether with word, paint, or photo, are held in the blood. :blackrose:
:iconkirastorm:
yes!! awesome twin powers unite!

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fading in the future
the past awaits
:iconsimplisticwords:
lol... we twins now?

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:jsenn: In the blood is where the words are held. We who are true poets, whether with word, paint, or photo, are held in the blood. :blackrose:
:iconkirastorm:
awesome twins!!

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fading in the future
the past awaits
:iconkiokuffiib11:
Very neat the way you did this. Relating fruit to feelings, I think it's really neat how you pieced this one together.

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Seshiru ( セシル ) aka Shindou ( 振動 )
:iconkirastorm:
glad you like.

though for me its more the taste of the certain fruits.

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fading in the future
the past awaits
:iconsimplisticwords:
yay! new title for the shirt?

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:jsenn: In the blood is where the words are held. We who are true poets, whether with word, paint, or photo, are held in the blood. :blackrose:

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